Badges 5
Moments 75
She is weak for my liking....馃槓
ch 0 9 Who is Lying?
Muchuan and Xiang Wan
Urban 路 Si Jin
yes, she is... Without him, u would be in jail...馃槖
Is this nice auntie talking about Bai Muchuan? she thought.
Muchuan and Xiang Wan
Urban 路 Si Jin
gd luck...
The questions by the detectives were tricky and repetitive. Some questions were totally similar to asking Xiang Wan to prove that her mom was really her mom; she was unable to answer such questions. Moreover, at the time of Zhao Jiahang's death, she was indeed alone in her rented apartment. She couldn't provide an alibi. Furthermore, the old and shabby neighborhood she lived in had no surveillance cameras at all. There was nothing that could prove she was indeed inside her apartment during that period.
Muchuan and Xiang Wan
Urban 路 Si Jin
Nobody asked u to stare at the boy... 馃槖
Never would she have guessed that a simple trip to the restroom would end up in receiving detention. It was that boy's fault! Neither he would have jumped right in front of her, nor would she have got herself in trouble, thought Julie to herself. Mr. Borrell seemed to be a person who enjoyed handing detention as if he was distributing free meals.
Letters to Romeo.
Fantasy 路 ash_knight17
May be u can write something like this: Just like how one has to damage one's muscles to build new and stronger muscles, the evolvement of the soul has to go through the similar constant damaging and rebuilding. The damage Bing Shi recieved from Guan Fei, who was a powerful soul was too much for Bing Shi's rebuilding soul. She got strong enough to evolve her soul while trying to recover from Guan Fei's blow, bt for how long could she keep up? The close she got to the top of hill, the unstable were her steps and the chances of her falling increased with each passing day...
Helping others to make her soul evolve didn't seem to be the solution. Bing Shi changed her plans and went against Mo Luwei head on right off the bat, and decided to go against Xuan Mu and Quin Yu, at the same time. Her soul showed signs of strengthening, but everyone knew that evolving her soul that had just evolved not a long time ago was simply... impossible.聽
QT: Against My Will
Fantasy 路 ChubbyLiv
Which country r u from? Is english ur 2nd language?
Helping others to make her soul evolve didn't seem to be the solution. Bing Shi changed her plans and went against Mo Luwei head on right off the bat, and decided to go against Xuan Mu and Quin Yu, at the same time. Her soul showed signs of strengthening, but everyone knew that evolving her soul that had just evolved not a long time ago was simply... impossible.聽
QT: Against My Will
Fantasy 路 ChubbyLiv
so u souldnt write 'everytime'...
Helping others to make her soul evolve didn't seem to be the solution. Bing Shi changed her plans and went against Mo Luwei head on right off the bat, and decided to go against Xuan Mu and Quin Yu, at the same time. Her soul showed signs of strengthening, but everyone knew that evolving her soul that had just evolved not a long time ago was simply... impossible.聽
QT: Against My Will
Fantasy 路 ChubbyLiv
Whatever u write, it should not give rise to new questions or confusions... Its okay for those scenes where u want to keep the mystery, bt when u r revealing those hidden facts, it should be clear cut and logical...
Helping others to make her soul evolve didn't seem to be the solution. Bing Shi changed her plans and went against Mo Luwei head on right off the bat, and decided to go against Xuan Mu and Quin Yu, at the same time. Her soul showed signs of strengthening, but everyone knew that evolving her soul that had just evolved not a long time ago was simply... impossible.聽
QT: Against My Will
Fantasy 路 ChubbyLiv
everytime she rcvd damage from Guan Fei* Bing Shi rcvd the blow when she killed Guan Fei...right?
Helping others to make her soul evolve didn't seem to be the solution. Bing Shi changed her plans and went against Mo Luwei head on right off the bat, and decided to go against Xuan Mu and Quin Yu, at the same time. Her soul showed signs of strengthening, but everyone knew that evolving her soul that had just evolved not a long time ago was simply... impossible.聽
QT: Against My Will
Fantasy 路 ChubbyLiv
My wife never gave up pushing ..................by saving Aoi Hong's killer... this line doesnt match the meaning u wanted to convey...
'Woman, if you knew it was because my wife didn't give up on pushing the mafia boss against her own husband by helping Aoi Hong's killer, you would never ask why.' The corner of Xuan Mu's lips lifted into a half-smile, answering everyone's questions with one sentence, "To feed her to my wife."聽
QT: Against My Will
Fantasy 路 ChubbyLiv
馃槓 I really dnt understand why Bing Shi did so many things... To evolve her soul? The ending of this ARC was confusing...
'Woman, if you knew it was because my wife didn't give up on pushing the mafia boss against her own husband by helping Aoi Hong's killer, you would never ask why.' The corner of Xuan Mu's lips lifted into a half-smile, answering everyone's questions with one sentence, "To feed her to my wife."聽
QT: Against My Will
Fantasy 路 ChubbyLiv
What did he mean?!
'Woman, if you knew it was because my wife didn't give up on pushing the mafia boss against her own husband by helping Aoi Hong's killer, you would never ask why.' The corner of Xuan Mu's lips lifted into a half-smile, answering everyone's questions with one sentence, "To feed her to my wife."聽
QT: Against My Will
Fantasy 路 ChubbyLiv
?!?
'Woman, if you knew it was because my wife didn't give up on pushing the mafia boss against her own husband by helping Aoi Hong's killer, you would never ask why.' The corner of Xuan Mu's lips lifted into a half-smile, answering everyone's questions with one sentence, "To feed her to my wife."聽
QT: Against My Will
Fantasy 路 ChubbyLiv
Its so contradicting... Her soul evolved after her last mission, thats why her presence was so strong... Bt now u r saying her soul is weakened to the point of shattering bcz of Xuan Mu's ex soul... Evolving and weakening at the same time is so contradictory...
Helping others to make her soul evolve didn't seem to be the solution. Bing Shi changed her plans and went against Mo Luwei head on right off the bat, and decided to go against Xuan Mu and Quin Yu, at the same time. Her soul showed signs of strengthening, but everyone knew that evolving her soul that had just evolved not a long time ago was simply... impossible.聽
QT: Against My Will
Fantasy 路 ChubbyLiv
How did it break now??
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QT: Against My Will
Fantasy 路 ChubbyLiv
How did the bond break? bcz of Fei Lans death? I think u should describe this thing called soul bond, why did it break now? In their previous lives Bai Meili choose someone else... So, why should Xuan Mu suffer bcz of this so called bond... Bing Shi also has her soulmate... Bt why didnt she suffer!?
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QT: Against My Will
Fantasy 路 ChubbyLiv
What happened?! 馃
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QT: Against My Will
Fantasy 路 ChubbyLiv
I see... What about the message part? And delaying the time part?!
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QT: Against My Will
Fantasy 路 ChubbyLiv
plz explain... 馃槓馃檪 #Author...
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QT: Against My Will
Fantasy 路 ChubbyLiv
Its was a fresh and unique start... Bt for this genre, FL is dumb, innocent, muddle-headed...She is easily manipulated... Someone copied her novel to do murder, she became the prime suspect, her house is monitored by spy camera, she almost died by some car or flowerpot from a building...Still she is thinking, she is hallucinating, scaring herserf...馃槖 The rltnship btwn ML and FL is dragging... Their rltnship is kind of push and pull game... Which is a huge turn off... Cmon, its not some kind of 'CEO's sweet dumb wife' novel...U should have characters which is beffiting for this genre...
Muchuan and Xiang Wan
Urban 路 Si Jin