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Really great novel. I really liked that this is not a typical rebirth novel but also explore the reason behind rebirth. Great chemistry between leads and no unnecessary misunderstandings/repetition.

Thank you so much for your response and taking it in a postive way. I really liked your novel as it was a fresh take on 'second chance genre'. I would love to continue this novel once again. I understand that writing a novel is much harder than commenting on something but I am really looking forward for your work. I really appreciate your hardwork and would wish you a good luck for your future endeavours.🙂👍

I really liked the story. I am fan of power-couple and strong female lead genre which kept me hooked. But major concern with this novel is the consistency. I was very disappointed with FL's character (I have only completed half of it I don't know if it will make me change my opinion in the next half). The author have shown FL as a genius in both medicine and business. She is also trained in secret organization. Even though it didn't quite sit well with me that these r totally unrelated field, I can ignore it as it was the premise of the story. When u describe any character with so many exceptional qualities u have to make sure to showcase those in every part of the character to make it believable. But major flaw I felt was that FL was never shown vigilant towards new people getting close to her. It is always shown that she is walking in traps without having any backup plan and at the end everything gets solved. I can understand in some cases author likes to create an interests within readers by making them believe that leads are behaving stupid but revealed later on that it was part of a plan. But in this novel I didn't find any such case. Here the FL actually didn't hv plan and it was blamed as she was powerless in front of family. Unfortunately the family bonds was not portrayed so strong which will make this excuse acceptable. From the first chapter it shows that she came for revenge from her uncle's family so it makes u question why is she trusting everyone so easily. How can u show her as strong business woman if she is so gullible. How FL treats her family it gives the impression that she might even forgive her uncle if he realised his mistakes. I felt that it was biased bcuz u can't blame everything on your aunt and say your uncle just got fooled ( just bcuz he is ur family). He also needs to bear the punishment. In contrast I felt ML character was defined very well. He is also powerful but he is very rational. I really liked that he never leave anything/ doubts unresolved and always tries to make back-up plans. But I would really appreciate the author for all the hard work and best of luck for future works.👍

I have completed 180 chapters but I am very conflicted with this novel. There are parts which I absolutely loved and also there are some which makes me unable to continue anymore. This novel unlike other novels doesn't give second chance where the lead is reborn at a time before the things go downhill and correct everything. Here, the FL had to deal with the consequences and redeem herself. It also shows the progress and the struggle to move on from heart-break. I really appreciate the author for showing that it is not easy to get rid of your feelings like a switch which unfortunately a lot other novel potrays. I really liked when the FL starts self-reflecting and tries to forgive others as well as herself. But regarding the ML or the progress of the couple disappointed me. First of all ML's entry felt a little forced to me due to the task assigned my the system and it's constant interference. There was no mystery regarding ML's feeling as the system kept informing the FL and it felt like no matter what she has to fell in love with him. Also the time frame in which the feelings progressed from friendship to love and FL starting to accept him was too short. Till here I was still able to accept as other novels of similar genre also depicts system catalysts the ML and FL union. I was also happy that here the 'playboy-turns-good guy' is shown as ML and not just as a secondary character. But as the story progresses I started doubting whether he was suitable for FL. My reasons for it was that the story reveals that ex was doing everything to protect the FL. Still I was fine with the ex not getting the girl even though he loved her bcuz he pushed her to suicide instead of trusting her and explain to her the reason he can't be together. My issue is actually with ML. Apart from honesty and open communication ( unlike ex) I couldn't find anything good about him. In case of ex it's shown that even though he loved the FL he took wrong decisions but at the same time he was ready to bear the consequences of his decisions. When he found out that she is moving on with someone else he didn't tries force her to get back but rather wants her to be happy. I found him stupid but not a jerk and he also paid huge price for it by losing the FL. But in case of ML, till now I could not find depth to his character or any struggle. He is as rich as ex though it is hinting that there are family issues with ML but ex also have issues as well, so nothing new. Secondly, when ML wanted a carefree life he just left the family business and enjoyed a casanova life and when he wanted to get back he started claiming his rights. I also didn't find him a good friend as he was not aware what his friend (ex) was going through. He was shown as friend to FL but he didn't do anything exceptional before he became a suitor as the FL already had churu as a support and the system was forcing the relationship. I didn't find him completely true to FL lead as well. There was no arc showing his change of dynamic with his friend bcuz of the FL. After knowing the struggle of FL lead he was angry at his friend (ex) but that anger didn't last long. If the anger was reduced bcuz of knowing his friends's(ex) story then it can be justified but here this was not revealed yet and he still went back to normal. I felt ML got everything easily as compared to other characters. Also there was no great character-development for him till now. Its the first story where I wanted a redemption arc for ex and for him to end up with the FL. Bcuz they were childhood sweetheart and none of them actually cheated on each other. They were forced by circumstances and they did whatever they felt would be right at that point. I personally don't like any pairing where the guy is allowed to have multiple relationship but the girl is kept pure/innocent which is the case with ML.

The story is good & fast paced. The ML & FL trust each other & no useless misunderstanding. Liked the romance & bond. FL was told as intelligent. But for me after knowldg frm rebirth & so many talents if she can't achieve whatever she did, then she would be just stupid. I am a fan of rebirth/strong female leads genre, so I felt she is average. I would have loved it if the author hv given any arc where FL have made/executed any plan flawlessly. Even her own revenge plan had so many loopholes & was done by someone else. I liked that there were not a lot of useless fillers but I would hv appreciated if the author have given more time to let the reader decide how they want to perceive the characters as story progresses rather than explicitly praising or demeaning any character bcuz for me it caused a negative impact. I hv read a lot of novels of same genre so I kind of start comparing. But I would really appreciate the author for your hardwork as I know it is not easy to write and deliver new stories. Keep up the good work 🙂