the beginning lines kept me there more than I am willing to admit
the ending was so funny
It's really hard to see hinata with anyone else she was obsessed with naruto
I had this feeling about fanfics for long time but didn't know how to put it in word so thank you (English isn't my first language either)
I think I got a read on the author he is one of the people who don't change the canon haven't you noticed that despite sasuke having a rival he didn't get one bit stronger than the original
of course the dog couldn't stay dog
The last line was cool as fuck
Keep it up I want to see dxd without romance for long time Well done right at least Peace out
True ok
respect to inazuma I will remember you
Naruto : The Wind Calamity
Fantasy · Devil_Hex