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This one is real! It's a perfect settings. It's my cup of tea honestly. I think MC is a man of culture as well. This one suits my taste ! !

I like the author to start his very first novel. Rookie mistake was creating a world. It is very important to describe the settings, so readers could imagine what kind of world they had. Another thing is the description of characters. It somehow lacking. Other than girl with red hair, you should describe her more concrete.

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