DarkLaw - Profile

I started off with a great interest in this story. I'm not very squeamish, so all the graphic occurrences don't phase me. I don't actively seek out smut, but once it's well written and has an actually good story plot, I find it enjoyable. That said, I'm at chapter 60, and I'm considering dropping simply because I personally don't like the MC any more. To be clear, the story is still well written no drop in writing quality or such, and the changes to the MC make perfect sense, given what has happened so far. The Reset at chapter 40 was new to me when used in a single story, I absolutely love a well written villain, and actually have a bit of dislike for the "Hero of Justice" type, but I found myself slowly growing to dislike the MC. I think I've just grown to dislike the level of disregard and the lack of self-control he shows as he becomes more secure in his safety, (I understand that it's an intentional part of the character, doesn't mean I have to like it) and I think I'm just unhappy that, at this point, the smut interrupts the progression of the story. To be clear the smut isn't out of place when written, and it is still well written, the story flows fine. At this point it's like watching anime on TV, it feels like there are more commercials in one episode that anime, it's like, Story progresses a bit, He's fucking again, interesting battle, He's fucking again, woke up and opened the bedroom door, He's fucking again, to me, it just feels like an interruption at this point. That said, I'm here mostly for the action and adventure, so that's also a part of it, and other than a bit of nitpicking that isn't important (like my growing annoyance with the words "Pouty lips" because I feel it's overused in the story) It's a great story and for the non-squeamish you should give it a try it's a great read.

I can understand if the cussing isn't your cup of tea, but that's simply a characteristic of the MC, if you don't like it that's fine, but not every story is going to be filled with only PG characters. Cussing is simply an integral part of the story. I can understand and agree with you if you have a bad first impression of this story, it's nowhere near the worst I've encountered, however I'm not always in the mood to give every story I encounter a second or even a fair chance, and other times I waste more time than I should looking for something decent to read. Again, if swearing is a dealbreaker for you that's perfectly reasonable, to each their own. If it's not, however, you may find yourself liking it as much as so many others. Writing off the cussing as an attempt to be "cool", is a disservice to the story especially considering that the story quality is leagues above many of the free stories that are often either poorly translated, poorly written, or riddled with awkward sentences and other grammatical errors that make them near impossible to get immersed in.

This has easily become one of my favourite stories on Webnovel. I've laughed harder than I have in a while quite a few times while reading this.