it was my loss
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Eastern · Crazy Orange Cat
i guess he really can grow into an enormous giant that may not be containable or detainable by the military. I guess by the time the military really comes, he already wouldve become a force to be reckoned with. But then there is also another method to detain him. By capturing his parents and friends. However, I’m sure it will end as a failure considering the commander’s personality and the plot armor
ch 0 5 Chapter 5: The Worried Students
Eastern · Crazy Orange Cat
Of course he wont be op from the start. It says not in the synopsis but in the novel that this ancient god race could grow indefinitely and that they could even reach and pluck the moon. they can but for now, he cant. you cant expect a three meter tall person to pluck the moon
ch 0 5 Chapter 5: The Worried Students
Eastern · Crazy Orange Cat
I did and it said he has the ‘potential’ to reach for the moon not now. A genius can’t do shit if they are restrained from young
ch 0 5 Chapter 5: The Worried Students
Eastern · Crazy Orange Cat
This is a special person dumbass. Of course they would pay attention to him in the end. If only a minority of people got it which was most likely, they would of course research these special people. And of course they would have the ability to capture them. You think the military can’t do anything to a person just above 3 meters? Even if he grows and becomes 10 or so meters, they would still have the ability to capture him with both force and trickery.
ch 0 5 Chapter 5: The Worried Students
Eastern · Crazy Orange Cat
That just makes it more likely dumbass. You think the gov has no brain, they will sacrifice one or even thousand for the well being of the country.
ch 0 5 Chapter 5: The Worried Students
Eastern · Crazy Orange Cat
There are some grammar mistakes and sometimes, its hard to read but its readable. It generally is a good novel and the only criticism I have to say is that the chapters are too long. You can divide them into several chapters and I’m sure it will become much more interesting. There are cases where it’s exciting but the long passages of texts make the excitement go away and make one bored instead. So I really suggest you to sepaeate them into several pieces. This way, your chapter count and update stability will increase and more chapters and better update stability would mean more readers.
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Fantasy · Kronos661
Every single person would be watched by at least a servant
Because as opposed to what she had hoped for, there was no such thing as remaining inconspicuous in this milieu of who's who.
Fantasy · Yolohy
Im sure the crown prince wouldnt even do anything even if she hadnt changed and more so when she had changed
"So you better watch how you talk to me, lest I might just have to whisper in his highness ears, how you ridiculed me in front of the royal guests."
Fantasy · Yolohy
She realize she will eventually get noticed by a palace aid or something who would also notify their masters or the others prince consorts, generals and prince right. That will lead to her death or eventual disgrace. By tgat time, it shouldve been better off with her staying in her chamber without going out. Or if she had devoured the twin tail fire birds first to have some chance in getting back to her form.
After getting ready, Tang Yue accompanied by Lotte, her palace aide, walked over to the main banquet hall.
Fantasy · Yolohy
This is actually my first time reading a female lead novel. The synopsis attracted me to this book. I have high hopes
"Don't keep beating down a dead snake... It might just come back alive and devour you wholly..." - Epigraph.
Fantasy · Yolohy
It’s about other mc
She had her eyes open wide and seemed to be looking at the arriving students. She looked at Lin for some time, which made him return the gaze. It was only for a moment, but he did catch a glimpse of resentment and contempt hidden within her eyes. Lin wondered why she had been looking at him like that, but he wouldn't let someone looking down on him do as they wish. He immediately assigned her to his lookout list that he created in his mind. He wouldn't take any chances in giving his enemies opportunities to control his life anymore. He learned that the hard way with the whole Lindon Family issue.
Fantasy · Zerosky
Cant it be smoke arm? An arm condensed of smoke; it would be interesting.
But the fallen acts as if it wasn't hurt at all and clawed at the fist. Condensing his body like this made it a bit more vulnerable to physical attacks
Fantasy · KenceRussel
The planes crashed before the eye appeared
Whether it be weapons of mass destruction like nuclear bombs or down to a simple cellphone, all of them magically vanished. The airplanes were no more and the humans inside can only brace themselves from death for being in such a high place
Fantasy · KenceRussel
It probably was a somehow straight line that absorbed light. And with some mystery elements, it was blinding; prolly too powerful for mortals
The eye shone with a blinding black light and did something unbelievable again. Modern technologies vanished or turned useless
Fantasy · KenceRussel
Because the little boys would prolly just cry
Screams and cries can be heard left and right. The little girls and even some adults peed on their pants but no one has the mood to ridicule or laugh at them. All of their focus was on the things they are seeing in the sky
Fantasy · KenceRussel
Good Good
汉语12
Fantasy · Kronos661