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it was my loss

ch 0 5 Chapter 5: The Worried Students

I'm A Wasteland Giant

I'm A Wasteland Giant

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Thx for the chapter

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Fantasy · Kronos661

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There are some grammar mistakes and sometimes, its hard to read but its readable. It generally is a good novel and the only criticism I have to say is that the chapters are too long. You can divide them into several chapters and I’m sure it will become much more interesting. There are cases where it’s exciting but the long passages of texts make the excitement go away and make one bored instead. So I really suggest you to sepaeate them into several pieces. This way, your chapter count and update stability will increase and more chapters and better update stability would mean more readers.

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Fantasy · Kronos661

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Thanks for the chapter

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Fantasy · Kronos661

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Thanks for the chapter

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Fantasy · Kronos661

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Every single person would be watched by at least a servant

Because as opposed to what she had hoped for, there was no such thing as remaining inconspicuous in this milieu of who's who.

Bloodline Evolution System: Reign of the Dragon Snake

Bloodline Evolution System: Reign of the Dragon Snake

Fantasy · Yolohy

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Im sure the crown prince wouldnt even do anything even if she hadnt changed and more so when she had changed

"So you better watch how you talk to me, lest I might just have to whisper in his highness ears, how you ridiculed me in front of the royal guests."

Bloodline Evolution System: Reign of the Dragon Snake

Bloodline Evolution System: Reign of the Dragon Snake

Fantasy · Yolohy

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It’s about other mc

She had her eyes open wide and seemed to be looking at the arriving students. She looked at Lin for some time, which made him return the gaze. It was only for a moment, but he did catch a glimpse of resentment and contempt hidden within her eyes. Lin wondered why she had been looking at him like that, but he wouldn't let someone looking down on him do as they wish. He immediately assigned her to his lookout list that he created in his mind. He wouldn't take any chances in giving his enemies opportunities to control his life anymore. He learned that the hard way with the whole Lindon Family issue.

Master Of Death

Master Of Death

Fantasy · Zerosky

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Cant it be smoke arm? An arm condensed of smoke; it would be interesting.

But the fallen acts as if it wasn't hurt at all and clawed at the fist. Condensing his body like this made it a bit more vulnerable to physical attacks

Primordial Darkness Heretic Art

Primordial Darkness Heretic Art

Fantasy · KenceRussel

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The planes crashed before the eye appeared

Whether it be weapons of mass destruction like nuclear bombs or down to a simple cellphone, all of them magically vanished. The airplanes were no more and the humans inside can only brace themselves from death for being in such a high place

Primordial Darkness Heretic Art

Primordial Darkness Heretic Art

Fantasy · KenceRussel

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It probably was a somehow straight line that absorbed light. And with some mystery elements, it was blinding; prolly too powerful for mortals

The eye shone with a blinding black light and did something unbelievable again. Modern technologies vanished or turned useless

Primordial Darkness Heretic Art

Primordial Darkness Heretic Art

Fantasy · KenceRussel

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Because the little boys would prolly just cry

Screams and cries can be heard left and right. The little girls and even some adults peed on their pants but no one has the mood to ridicule or laugh at them. All of their focus was on the things they are seeing in the sky

Primordial Darkness Heretic Art

Primordial Darkness Heretic Art

Fantasy · KenceRussel

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