TheWitcher

1mth

Commented

'That's impressive!' She went over the names of the two applicants and smiled. 'So the girl is Lux, and the man is… Jet.'

An Extra’s POV

Fantasy · Magecrafter

TheWitcher

1mth

Commented

It was a place brighter than daylight, despite there being no sun in sight. Clouds replaced solid ground, and the horizon seemed to stretch on endlessly.

An Extra’s POV

Fantasy · Magecrafter

TheWitcher

3mth

Commented

Arthur's breaths came in desperate gasps, as though each one might be his last. He gazed down at the deep gash in his stomach, where his internal organs peeked through. A Cerberus, a monstrous hound-like creature, had inflicted the wound upon him. Dizziness overwhelmed him as his lifeblood seeped away.

Level Up Legacy

Fantasy · MellowGuy

TheWitcher

3mth

Commented

Did the golden haired guy managed to survive or what? How come the captain still has the crystal?

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Rise Of The Hollow Death Soldier

Action · Supreme_IQ

TheWitcher

4mth

Commented

Pronoun needs changing here.

Lyrian too stood there, perplexed, her eyes fixed on their base camp, which was now completely trashed and destroyed. Torn tents lay scattered, some even burnt, with remnants of their campfire strewn across the ground.

Rebirth Of The Strongest Worldsmith

Fantasy · WriterTheos

TheWitcher

4mth

Commented

This grammar gave me a seizure

This was Leon. His eyes were white, although they had rolled back into his head, but his sword was also already out, causing them to go white anyways.

Rebirth Of The Strongest Worldsmith

Fantasy · WriterTheos

TheWitcher

4mth

Commented

😂

Just at that split moment, as everyone looked around with their eyes wide open, their guards up for anything that might attack, a giant tiger the size of an elephant jumped out of the thick bushes.

Rebirth Of The Strongest Worldsmith

Fantasy · WriterTheos

TheWitcher

4mth

Posted

What I liked about this novel is the quality of its writing, such generous vocabulary making the read enjoyable and enticing. The story development is exciting and provides lots of anticipation. Likewise, the world background is very well described and there is clear picture about how the apocalypse ended that way. The only thing I am mostly off about are the characters and their personalities. I apologize but I am not a fan of immature characters. I completely lost it after the introduction of the Oracle lady and her interactions with the protagonist and his allies. Some of the characters such as Colin has a tendency to be immature but maybe that just how the writer wants him to be. I would love to further my reading as I really love how the author does a very articulate novel but I suppose my taste for this type of novel is washout. This is just my sincere opinion and I hope other readers will find it different from me. All the best!

Chef in the Apocalypse

Fantasy · leeroycgna

TheWitcher

4mth

Commented

What a refreshing read ✨

ch 74 Feast (4)

Chef in the Apocalypse

Fantasy · leeroycgna

TheWitcher

4mth

Commented

See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule

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Chef in the Apocalypse

Fantasy · leeroycgna

TheWitcher

7mth

Replied to Drac_De_Foc

You don't have to. Majority of people are already supporting this novel and is evident of being number 1 in golden rankings. People like you are just a drop in the ocean. Long live Shadow Slave! 🔥🌱✨