yeah your name kinda gave it away lol. but anyway, this is a really great fic for your age, and don't let any haters force you to drop it. as i said, you aren't a bad author, just inexperienced and that'll be easily fixed with time. you can only improve as you continue to write afterall.
I mean, considering 90 people agree with me and more than a dozen dropped the fic due to similar reasons, I'd say calling me a liar is stupid but whatever. You do you.
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