AbsoluteOblivion - Profile

For the writing quality I would constantly notice, errors or use of the wrong word, although in the later chapters the inconsistencies are less frequent, they still appear every now and then. For the updating stability I feel like its quite good, at the time of making this review its 8 chapters a week, so thats an 5/5 from me. For story, I know this kind of thing is kinda cliche but its the little things that hook me, like the MC,s system acting uncharacteristicly human, or the fact the MC worrying about the return of the big bad, but at the same time not worrying at all. For character development, I like how the MC is still themself but also more due to their situation they were put in, and at times they decided to act against the original personality I had attuned the them, and for the other characters as well seem to be developing their own personalities, although its a little obvious in some places, maybe going into the back story of other side characters and adding more depth to their inner self I could find some attachment to them, but right now their all acting as characters like them are expected. For world development, I like how there is seemingly more societies that utilize their own system, as well as the fact as governments trying to monopolize a new power and people treating it like they use to weapons, it really adds to how humans are still gonna act the same way even if they don’t understand it. All in all I do like this story and find the writers work out standing.

For writing quality I've noticed numerous errors and mistakes, and while it's simple to figure out what it was supposed to say, it's still troubling. Haven't seen an update in a while. The story is okay, though I can't really get excited for the MC if I don't know what their end goal is, or if the is an actual threat. Characters are pretty ok, nothing really stands out to me though, their personality's are hard to pin down, one moment Valli is a diplomat and the next he's siphoning off energy from a goddess. Background is good though, providing enough info to understand the current state of the world.

For this chapter I couldn't see any obvious writing errors, so thats a plus. Rate of updates has been plenty generous, not fast enough to distract nor slow enough to lose interest. The story is really starting to develop, I personally love how multiple factions are siding with the colony simply because they have a common enemy. I admire the individuality given to what I originally assumed to be a side character we would never see again, or a typical fall madness and leading everyone to their death kind of character. I can tell from the previous chapters that there are plans to add more races and factions to this story, the tree people in particular really got my attention, I would also like to see Anthony reconnecting with those tree people (Dryads? Trent's?) and learn their reason for befriending the colony so quickly.