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wtf just happened at chp 5, is the author braindead?

One of the worst ff I've read. The interactions are thoughtless and everything else doesn't make sense. I hope this "author", reads more rather than write.

damn, might be the biggest headache I've read in a long time. The idea was weak, execution is worse, The grammar's disgusting, dialogues are like children's book. How can a person publish a written work like this and go "okay this good'. The writing won't even be accepted at highschool level essays.

bro, he's right. you literally addressed Saitama as s2pid in ur own review. So you really thought he is. Just admit it and move on, admitting can be sign of improving too, good luck.

Poor man version of the Holy Necromancer I've read before.

(inward thinking)*

so bad, author tries so hard to use complicated words but failed so hard to insert it naturally and smoothly. events are nothing exciting or worth reading. the MC does too much inward that its getting annoying read. Can you just show it?, instead of telling every damn scene.

are you unable to make a good romance story, thats why youre making it a harem? Honestly it would feel more satisfying as a reader to have just 1 companion who has a really good story with this kind of slice of life. stop pleading the desires of these kids who likes harem so much.

i agree it was pretty interesting at the start it somehow became too boring. by any chance do you any good novels that is good with the same idea of this one.

i really this kind of type of story. Very enjoyable, it may not be that good but Im having fun. ...........................................