It’s really good, but I’m not a fan of your book cover- also I think may be your book title is a bit long? Quite frankly I’m excited where your going with this book. Yuki is a bit all over the place, she is such a complex character. She flirty, ruthless, intelligent-but what I don’t understand how and why she hides that. I really like how you’re going with Alex like he’s showing his emotions- no masculine toxicity! I understand that it’s all about the FL but try to focus more on your Male character as well please!
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It’s really good, but I’m not a fan of your book cover- also I think may be your book title is a bit long? Quite frankly I’m excited where your going with this book. Yuki is a bit all over the place, she is such a complex character. She flirty, ruthless, intelligent-but what I don’t understand how and why she hides that. I really like how you’re going with Alex like he’s showing his emotions- no masculine toxicity! I understand that it’s all about the FL but try to focus more on your Male character as well please!
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