Not bad
ch 0 1 CHAPTER 1- ERA START
Fantasy · LUCADBORN
It hasn't taken shape yet. The story is only starting so can't say much but there is no world background. Language quality was good but there were still some Incorrect wording.
Pornographic Content Hate or bullying Release of personal info Violence Spam Other
Not bad
ch 0 1 CHAPTER 1- ERA START
ERA
Fantasy · LUCADBORN