Raycurls

2yr

Commented

"Hoped" > "Hopped"

Nick just smiled and hopped into the broken truck. Hastin thought Nick understood him now as he saw Slayer disappear with Spencer. He too hoped in the truck thinking that Nick was going to drive away from the mansion. But right when he thought he was reversing, Nick entered the mansion and the gate closed behind.

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Horror · Darlene_Virginia

Raycurls

2yr

Commented

"from this horrible" horrible what?

He walked away stomping his foot on the ground as he was irritated with everyone around him. He could not understand what was wrong with these people? They just can't be so selfish all the time. They all must stay together and try to figure out a way to escape from this horrible, instead they were all fighting and wasting the time. Once Aaron left Adan turned towards Ura and asked,

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Horror · Darlene_Virginia

Raycurls

2yr

Commented

"testing is complete"

"He said we will have to wait until the results of the powerful weapon testing complete. He recently got some very bad news that the bomb he was carrying might not be as powerful as it looks. And to be frank it might actually not be one! We might have arrested the wrong individual who was carrying a toy bomb like a toy gun."

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Horror · Darlene_Virginia

Raycurls

2yr

Commented

delete the word his

"Ok. But make it fast. I have other things to do! And why is he even here in the first place? He doesn��t look like someone who would commit any grave mistakes." David who works along with Carson asked. He came back from his after his weekend off and was not there when Jackson was arrested. He was yet to be briefed about his case.

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Horror · Darlene_Virginia

Raycurls

2yr

Commented

your not you (on grammar check)

"I need to eat to live. Only if I live, then I can update the story. Tell you App that, and stop irritating me from now on. I don't know when I will lose my mind and burn this whole mansion."