Hey! So far I think this story has some great potential, And I really like the characters so far. There are just a few issues, 1. The story has a few typos 2. The story is great but sometimes you repeat yourself and 3. The main plot isnt centered around the MC being reincaranated. But there are some reasons on why you should read this webnovel, 1. the chapters are surprising long, especially for a novel with not that many views, ratings, or collections 2. I, personally really like the plot and the dont care about the story being centered around the MC being reincarnated or not 3. I like how you later switched to 3rd person from 1st person and 4. This novel has some amazing potential and some nice comedy, it also has a good update schedule, I am looking forward to see where the story goes. I am enjoying the way you descibe things too!
Fantasy · Haetae
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Hey! So far I think this story has some great potential, And I really like the characters so far. There are just a few issues, 1. The story has a few typos 2. The story is great but sometimes you repeat yourself and 3. The main plot isnt centered around the MC being reincaranated. But there are some reasons on why you should read this webnovel, 1. the chapters are surprising long, especially for a novel with not that many views, ratings, or collections 2. I, personally really like the plot and the dont care about the story being centered around the MC being reincarnated or not 3. I like how you later switched to 3rd person from 1st person and 4. This novel has some amazing potential and some nice comedy, it also has a good update schedule, I am looking forward to see where the story goes. I am enjoying the way you descibe things too!
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Fantasy · Haetae