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100% agreed, it's like oh I saw someone die once now I'm gonna make a magical creature that will take away all the magic in the world

"Difficult is an understatement, it's an insane plan that I've embraced like those before me. Sometimes, I wonder if I'm insane for agreeing to participate in such a plan," Asterion buried his head in the hollow between her breasts, his tone tinged with sarcasm.

[HPxJJK] - Harry Potter and the Supremacy of Cursed Blood

[HPxJJK] - Harry Potter and the Supremacy of Cursed Blood

Anime & Comics · MaliciousPrince

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you're adding characters like Luffy and still think your character is gonna measure up with what is basically a minor enhancement quirk?

(Author- Hey, I hope you all enjoy! I enjoyed writing this! Listened and vibe to 'Uchiha Rap: Red' by Rustage the whole time. It's a straight vibe. Go check it out! Link in this paragraph comment!)

The Uchiha's in MHA (AU)

The Uchiha's in MHA (AU)

Anime & Comics · DaoistShinobi

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still don't get why they don't have chakra. even if you wanted to nerf the characters they should still have chakra since they wished for the powers of Madara, obito, and itachi

(I will now start implementing the romance a little bit more heavily. I am a new writer so I may not write the best romance. If there is anything that is cringe, or that you don't like the please comment. I read all the comments and consider what they say seriously.

The Uchiha's in MHA (AU)

The Uchiha's in MHA (AU)

Anime & Comics · DaoistShinobi

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it's Yeah not yah

Itachi and I on the other hand were sat on the left side of the room with me directly in front of him near the window. Hell yah the edgy seat!

The Uchiha's in MHA (AU)

The Uchiha's in MHA (AU)

Anime & Comics · DaoistShinobi

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just saying, maybe it's time to find a new editor.

Some one told me that Mc thrashing the goons in the Yuri arc so ruthlessly was forced, let me ask you, what will you do when you are constantly betrayed and feel that your hardwork was for nothing and then when some one you care for gets extremely hurt, will you not get angry and made and wanna kill someone, if my explanation still isn't enough for those saying that the scene was forced,I have nothing to say,

In Marvel with template system

In Marvel with template system

Anime & Comics · MynameJeff

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I would fire that editor if I were you

Jack looked around himself trying to look for what hit him, suddenly he heard the sounds of footsteps and immediately cast a spell just in time to slow down a might bug eagle the size of a car from scooping him up into the air, Jack quickly dodged to the size, the next moment, the eagle broke out from Jacks spell, and rushed at him once again.

In Marvel with template system

In Marvel with template system

Anime & Comics · MynameJeff

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hey just saying I wouldn't want to pay an editor for this. you should fire them

I felt heavy as if I was bound by soemthing heavy, but that didn't matter anymore, nothing did, I am not worthy anymore.

In Marvel with template system

In Marvel with template system

Anime & Comics · MynameJeff

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yep this confirms that you should fire the editor

"It says that both parties aren't allowed to the timer with each other inventions for greedy purposes such as selling them or mass producing them unless given permission." asked Tony as he pointed at the Clause.

In Marvel with template system

In Marvel with template system

Anime & Comics · MynameJeff

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again fire your editor

Jack was a little surprised by Yuri, on the moment she was consoling His alter personality and the next moment she is hugging him and crying, Jack slowly latter her as she cried for a bit, not knowing what else to do, he just kept saying 'it's gonna be alright to her over and over again

In Marvel with template system

In Marvel with template system

Anime & Comics · MynameJeff

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man you gotta fire your editor

"Yeah! this place is owned by a former cop, dad always takes us here for the the the food" told Gwen as she passed the menu over to Peter.

In Marvel with template system

In Marvel with template system

Anime & Comics · MynameJeff

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if you are going to use the word either in a paragraph there needs to be an alternative. "either he was dreaming OR this was actually real"

The reason why the pictures could move means that either he was dreaming, but that wasn't possible since the whole of New York had such material.

In Marvel with template system

In Marvel with template system

Anime & Comics · MynameJeff

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