Hey! If you are reading this just know that I am immensely grateful of you to show interest in my story. I am very thankful. I am writing this to inform the people interested that there is an auxiliary chapter following this chapter. So I recommend that you read "Jab's Story, Part One: The Blue Tint Of Fondness" before reading the chapter that will follow that one. It's a side story covering the past of some characters that gives context to some of the things happening in the main storyline; it's a fully canon backstory. Thank you again if you are reading this. Feel free to give me feedback on my story, I would love to hear your thoughts; it would help me improve my writing. Thank you!
ch 19 - Conversation
Sci-fi · _oli_
Hey! If anyone read this, I just realized it probably wasn't clear, but there'a special chapter that kinda go after that one that covers the past of a character. It is only part one of a whole arc in multiple parts that will cover the whole past of that character. The other parts will be released bits by bits as the story goes on. I will also be doing that special fragmanted past character arc for every main character. Every character is then gonna have its own auxilary volume about their past, compiled in chapters (parts) that will be released thorough the actual book story line. That sound so unclear when i read it but hopefully that makes sense. Thank you for having interest in my book, even if it's just reading a few lines!
ch 10 - Evaluation (Part Two)
Sci-fi · _oli_
Hey! I don't know if anyone is gonna read this or if it's gonna be of use for anyone but I still think I need to write it. I made some changes about the trainings in the past chapters, so it might be confusing to read this new one without knowing. Anyway, if anyone is reading this, thank you. Really. Thank you for reading this story, even if its only just opening a chapter and reading a few pharagraphes. Thank you for your interest.
ch 14 - Debut
Sci-fi · _oli_
As of today, Jan 22 2024, I've hit 20K views. I know this isn't a lot for most people, but for me, it's a huge milestone. I want to thank anybody who gave the slightest interest in my novel, I genuinely truly appreciate it. I would be immensely grateful for anyone willing to leave a review or comment or anything to let me know what they think of my story. Maybe things you like about it or tips you think might help me. 20K is a lot for me, knowing I'm a non-native English speaker who is working on this alone during my free time. I also never advertised it or shared it in any way. I am aware that I do not upload chapters often or with a stable schedule, but it is solely because I only write when I have time and when I am inspired. The chapters are also very long compared to the average novel here, they usually have around 4.5K words. But I do think my story has some good things going for it. The first chapters may not be the best since they are pretty old now, but I like to think that my writing and grammar have improved. I also often go back over all my chapters to do some edits sometimes. But I really recommend you give it a chance, I do think it gets better with time. And I hope the future chapters will also get better too. Again, thank you for anyone who read my story, even if it was just a chapter or a few lines. I would really love to know what you think of it. If you don't really want to leave a review or a comment here for people to see, I'm totally ok with that. If anything, you can find me on Discord as .gracien (oli) and let me know your opinion there. Thank you!
ch 24 - Collision
Bunker 12
Sci-fi · _oli_