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thank you for your truthfulness, currently, I was editing it since the grammar and spelling

sorry , it's my first time writing and English language wasn't my best

Gonna be Shameless I'm going to give a five star with to my work. You better to check it out , this story might be a good one for you. And I also accept opinion about my work , you know I'm not good at grammar .

hey there, an idea is good but the story pace so fast and the way it's been written was so direct. Make it less direct, so that it's make the reader hoke up by curiosities