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Singkat banget epsnya huhu

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Pada paragraf "saat mereka di perjalan menuju pasar" sampai predict menanyakan "kalian mau melihat" itu terjadi pengulangan obrolan dan kata2, kalimat, dan paragrafnya pun sama. Can't wait for the new chap tho, semangat author 馃挄

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What's itu mengacu pada "what is." jadi penggunaannya salah, harusnya what aja, semangat author! 馃嵒

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Memutuskan tanpa berunding sama temen2nya, duh idaman sekali nada ku 馃槱

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Mungkin "shall we begin, looking for siska?" lebih enak, sesuai grammar juga, but, mistakes makes perfect. 馃嵒

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Nada gemesin yaak wkwkwk

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