Badges 4
Moments 6
1yr
Commented this has potential to be the best arc yet❤️❤️
"Arata-chan you meanie," she pouted, nocking an arrow and drawing her bow, a crimson mist floating around it.
Saikō no Chitsujo
Action · The_Shadow_Author1
Solid start up, dialogue seems good, and the story seems to be heading toward an interesting premise. Fix your narration sha... It will continue to impede your writing style. It will keep ruining the experience
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3yr
Commented Much better dialogue... The characters are well written
ch 0 2 Prologue : The Chosen
HELLSGATE : TALES OF A DIVINE WAR
Fantasy · R_F_T_S
STOP BULLYING TATSUMI
ch 30 Chapter 17: Aftermath
Saikō no Chitsujo
Action · The_Shadow_Author1