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please continue I love this story and I want to see where it goes

Super Adeptus Astarte William

The abilities that the group developed would be similar to what we usually see in super soldiers, like regeneration, greater resistance and super strength, perhaps night vision and so on, because if so, the story will be very dynamic if it slowly introduces new variants of the dead. alive

Espero que não seja um imenso Harém já que mesmo que esse mundo siga um pouco a lógica hentai não faz muito sentido algo assim, além do mais por favor não coloque super poderes para o MC apenas a capacidade de aumentar estáticas e se tornar tipo um Bruce li ou a força de um bodybuilder já está bom

Uma ótima história continue o bom trabalho, gosto de ver como o MC está lentamente construindo seu próprio reino de forma gradual, também gosto de como os povos livres são retratados e de como o MC não tenta simplesmente fazer todos pensarem como se fosse o século 21

I love the story but I believe the author gave the MC a lot of power so I don't make much sense, he's basically Superman, if weaknesses and me getting stronger by the minute, as if his very presence would destroy a planet what in itself is already too much unless it was in the Dragon Ball universe. (I hope you understand, I used Google translator to write)

Anissa and Eve

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more we need more chapters one is not enough for the hunger of a faithful servant of the empire, let the crusade begin. I think William took it easy on the sisters he should have been a little firmer with the punishment

they are strong, even differentiated between other chapters of space marines but they are not invincible, i am sure that some imperial knights, demonic princes and a fleet of tyranids can easily finish the chapter in its full childhood according to these advices i think its chapter balanced Enough to pioneer the universe, but I would prefer that they had a solar system at their base, with wild worlds and feusal peoples from which to recruit most of their initiates. remembering that I used Google translator to write this review, so forgive me for any mistakes

by the Emperor a great chapter I'm curious to know how the most fanatical people will react

since I'm loving each character, you've demonstrated the idea of ​​each character well and how paranoid everyone is in the dark 40k universe

It does a bit of realm building, like the group starts building and rebuilding various parts of the prison creating a real Post Apocalyptic fortress, Strategies to survive and maybe even the pregnancy of some women making the group have to readjust with the birth of children in the apocalypse

Does Wonder Woman know and agree with all the atrocities the Amazons are doing or is she being controlled?

I'm anxious to know what's going to happen to the Amazons and Wonder Woman I expect something brutal and cruel against these monsters, Wonder Woman will be next to the MC or next to her sisters I'm kind of curious about that

Thanks for posting back, are the chapters going to be once a week?