The story is impressive; I mean, you kinda know that the plotline is on point. I would suggest shorter paragraphs and less comma, and I also suggest improving on the narrative style.
Urban · Shyxlio
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The story is impressive; I mean, you kinda know that the plotline is on point. I would suggest shorter paragraphs and less comma, and I also suggest improving on the narrative style.
The Change (book 1 of the change series)
Urban · Shyxlio