Salad_ina_Bucket

5mth

Replied to NStar

Now he just needs a support shadow

ch 1315 Steel Devil

Shadow Slave

Fantasy · Guiltythree

Salad_ina_Bucket

9mth

Commented

This is the last chapter I'll be able to read before I'm deployed to basic training, can't wait to come back to 100 stacked chapters! See yall in a few months!

ch 1062 Gone Fishing

Shadow Slave

Fantasy · Guiltythree

Salad_ina_Bucket

9mth

Replied to LRQ

There are a lot of mysteries behind the Winter Beast for the author to play around with and possibly allow Sunny to kill it, so maybe

ch 1058 The Fall of Falcon Scott (76)

Shadow Slave

Fantasy · Guiltythree

Salad_ina_Bucket

9mth

Commented

Well Sunny, it feels like you're gonna get your conviction soon 😭

ch 1050 The Fall of Falcon Scott (68)

Shadow Slave

Fantasy · Guiltythree

Salad_ina_Bucket

9mth

Commented

NEW SHADOW BABYYYYY!!!

ch 1046 The Fall of Falcon Scott (64)

Shadow Slave

Fantasy · Guiltythree

Salad_ina_Bucket

9mth

Posted

After reading 120 Chapters: Writing Quality 4/5, has some minor but noticeable mistakes. Story Development 5/5, I believe the MC progresses finely and it makes me feel that greed to see him get stronger. Character Design 4/5, no bad characters but there isnt one I find particularly interesting (So far), I feel they could have more personality but it isn't really a problem for me. World Background 3/5, this is my only personal critique. The world is great but it's all things we've seen a bunch of times. Overall I say the novel is a very good 8/10, it just needs something unique about the world, magic system, or characters that makes it stand out from other novels to make it top tier, but it does do a really good job on the elements of the story that it has from the power system to the story and more.

I Just Inherited The Arcane Emperor's Legacy

Fantasy · WhiteNightingale

Salad_ina_Bucket

9mth

Commented

Is it me or I kinda find it weird that with a name like Valkyr that person was not only a mage, but one that had deception skills 😂. I imagine someone who's good at fighting with weapons when I hear Valkyr

ch 82 Plans

I Just Inherited The Arcane Emperor's Legacy

Fantasy · WhiteNightingale

Salad_ina_Bucket

9mth

Commented

I think this happend too quick, should've hinted with her being sad until after the beast wave then revealed it, would've had more impact and had better timing in my opinion.

ch 69 Good Bye