DaoistGtoWmx

2mth

Commented

so is she dyed in the red blood of others or hers? Then wouldnt her blood be red then not blue if it is hers

A sudden powerful hit shook her body as she was blasted back, blue blood leaving her mouth,

The Conquerors Path

Fantasy · Chaosking

DaoistGtoWmx

3mth

Posted

300 ch and he is only lvl 13, terrible story and drags on way to much i skipped over at least 140 chapters and didn't miss anything relevant

My Necromancer Class

Fantasy · Aero182

DaoistGtoWmx

4mth

Commented

I think this one should be the most powerful. even your description tells you that it is??

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Manipulative Harem God

Urban · SKuLL

DaoistGtoWmx

9mth

Replied to LittleBastard879

I do like the story so far, but the thing I kinda don't like about it is the fact that they talk way too properly. I mean even the hunters sound like they are old-century novels like "I have never been graced to see such beauty" It makes it hard to truly connect with the book with unrealistic characters

My Celestial Ascension

Fantasy · LittleBastard879

DaoistGtoWmx

11mth

Posted

I'm really liking the story so far, the only thing i hope you do is to not overdo it with all of the extra women. Maybe keep it at like 20 and just improve on their development, that would definitely make the story much better. Having to many women would make it hard to keep up and remember them all and it makes their love way to shallow

Cultivator With Modern AI

Eastern · JosieGan

DaoistGtoWmx

1yr

Commented

I think her being in the sovereign realm already is kinda a stretch maybe like control or even profound would be ok but her being 27 and already top power just doesn't seem right to me

ch 33 Huge Event

Corrupt Creations

Fantasy · DanTeNL

DaoistGtoWmx

1yr

Posted

not good, contradicts alot of things through out story, no depth in romance or kingdom building or well story plot in general, need proof reading i mean like "she was mad and couldnt continue eating so she stopped talking and continued eating" and this type of writing continues to happen alot throughout the story

Dragon Monarch System

Urban · Dark_Bangali

DaoistGtoWmx

1yr

Commented

im just not feeling this novel, he is a fire dragon maybe idk but has the bloodline and is a short blue haired guy? He is royalty maybe but his bloodline isnt as powerful? and he doesnt even have a unique element like space or time or chaos or anything that would set him apart.

After reaching a certain stage, one can use elements. Or another way of using elements is by having an elemental type bloodline, just like Aditya who now has Inferno Blaze Dragon Bloodline. There are 5 primary elements fire, earth, water, wind, and lightning. Other than 5 primary elements there are also certain individuals who have rare elements mainly due to their bloodline or because they are born with them.

Dragon Monarch System

Urban · Dark_Bangali

DaoistGtoWmx

1yr

Commented

IDK why but i kinda don't want her to be apart of sol harem if she is

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DaoistGtoWmx

1yr

Commented

everything feels too rushed, and their conversations feel robotic, no in-depth details with anything really, it needs to slow down a little bit so we can get a better grasp of his character instead of hey I'm a dragon im dying to take my kid, here bad guys memory stay away back to village me fight

ch 27 First and Last Meeting

True King's Ecstasy

Fantasy · ElectricLuna

DaoistGtoWmx

1yr

Posted

the story is terrible, I'm done. he is literally 30 years old and is incredibly dumb, has no common sense, and does not even have basic knowledge of life in general. he should at least has some street smarts from a past life, but yet just by what be spoiled he becomes stupid, that doesn't make sense