Writing is just a hobby I started on a whim.
2020-10-15 Joined Japan
Do your thing chef
I know what you're thinking... But trust the process. Let me cook.
Video Games · Unusual_
only after the 3rd years graduates, he'll be swimming in dough after that
At the end of the day, a dropout has to be selected.
Anime & Comics · JYouyi
Thanks for the chapter!
ch 28 Chapter 27: *Title at the bottom*
Video Games · Kuroki_Shishiro
is it just me or is this chapter the same as the last one?
Chapter 16: Vacation in Another World!
Anime & Comics · theogbasilisk
Meanwhile, the male Magikarp had a dragon affinity, so chances were high that Ryujin was the dad. Still, on this side, the chance was there that it was Magidraco's kid, or that it was a coincidence based on the same reasoning as with the poison one.
Anime & Comics · Azrail93
Ice Gae Bolg
(Let me know if you have any ideas for the MC elemental burst, thank you)
Video Games · Barru04
Your paragraphs are kinda long, I don't mind it much, but others might take one look at it and drop the story then and there. Splitting it up into smaller paragraphs will make it easier to read.Also, try to separate the dialogues and narration texts, and maybe add some indicators on who is saying what. If it's a back and forth conversation, it's fine without any indications, but in some situations one character may need to speak twice or thrice in a row with some pausing.That's all, I'm liking the story so far. Keep it up!
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Video Games · Barru04
j how big
[Chant: Gunara, God of Darkness, Woohoo, Transformation of the Dark Demon!]
Anime & Comics · Novelette_Seeker
"Tell me about it," Silver said with a light nod. "I think I saw him stub his toe at least 7 times every five minutes— what terrible luck."
Video Games · Unusual_
"Demoiselle, will you not consider being more... Incognito?" Melus asked. "You're practically adding a target on your back by coming here."
Video Games · Unusual_
Yeah, the higher level you are the longer your lifespan. But, I think most die before ever getting to use it.
That kind of power was almost impossible to fight back!
Anime & Comics · Novelette_Seeker
You gotta let the chef prepare before he starts cooking. You can't just jump straight to the lemon.
Video Games · Unusual_
"Go easy on her..." She mumbled under her breath as she looked at Isaac's figure.
Video Games · Unusual_
See? even Neuvillette thinks so too
"While you were busy with your... D—" Neuvillette paused for a moment and thought over the next word he was about to say. In the end, he chose another word. "—Performance... Your informants and the Marechaussee Phantom had gathered a quite significant amount of information."
Video Games · Unusual_
Weird flex, but okay......
'It's no wonder Freminet liked this so much.' Lyney thought with a satisfied smile on his lips. 'Plus, the top hat that he drew on top of the milk was a nice touch.'
Video Games · Unusual_
Thanks for the chapter!
ch 64 Why are you...?
Genshin: The Serenity System
Video Games · Unusual_