Someone agrees with me 😶
ch 0 1 Break up with girlfriends
Eastern · DarkForces
Can’t wait till I can get the rest of the book!
ch 87 Shattering the Tranquility
Fantasy · Feng Jiong
I like your writing style, and the plot so far.
ch 0 2 His perfect scheme
Urban · lizmorgan
Why was I so unlucky today, first my girlfriend broke up with me, and now I’m being chased by (a grandfather ghost) or (the ghost of a grandfather) Not criticizing, just saying it’s a little easier to read this way, at least for me.
Ye Chen Running Down the grass "motherfucker, why today I was so unlucky, First I broke up with my girlfriend and now I'm being chased by the ghost of the old grandfather" Ye Chen kept cursing in his heart.
Eastern · DarkForces
I would suggest rewriting this chapter with someone versed in English grammar, it’s a little hard to read at times, and I’m not sure which tense (past, present, future,) you meant to use, but I believe you used all three, however it’s a good story so far, and I think I will continue to read.
ch 0 1 Break up with girlfriends
Eastern · DarkForces
Hooray! More dragons! Even if they are evil.
ch 88 Episode 28: Stalling the Wyverns
Fantasy · Kyosei
Why did you write a review with only emojis?
Interesting, I like how blunt iris is.
ch 49 Goodnight Kiss
Urban · ArriaCross
I like the ‘chat’ you add, it adds another dimension, another perspective.
ch 44 Eat Your Slippers
Urban · ArriaCross
Well done.
ch 29 I Forbid You to Kiss Other Men
Urban · ArriaCross
What a lovely song, have you tried to make a melody for it?
ch 13 The Phantom of Your Love
Urban · ArriaCross
Although the wound on his back is deep, fortunately the blood had dried up or else the journey here, which takes about four hours, would have already taken away his life. (Not criticizing, just saying this makes it flow a little better)
Seeing this, Feng Jiu comforted her: "Although the wound on his back is deep, fortunately the blood had dried up or else the journey here which takes about four hours would have already taken away his life. As for his feet, it's just some skin trauma, with the proper care and medication, he'll recover in a couple of days, there's no danger."
Mesmerizing Ghost Doctor
Fantasy · Feng Jiong