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Urban · BRJones
Thank you so much for the review. Also thank you for the criticism. On my doc, the paragraphs don't seem that long, due to it being on my laptop. I will definitely take that into account when editing/rewriting the story. To address some of the things you pointed out. The main reason it feels rushed is that I did rush it a bit. This is going to be the first of MANY edits and/or rewrites.
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Cover: 10/10 Simple cover, but grabs the attention of the reader. Synopsis: 10/10 Well worded. Grabs attention. Gives an insight into the novel and main character. BOOK From what I have read so far it is a very interesting book. The phrasing used in the book keep it interesting but also give vivid images to the readers. I found myself pulled into the book. I am not normally one for these types of books, but I found myself holding on to each word and being drawn in deeper to the story and its world. Very well written.
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Urban · BRJones