Ammogod77 - Profile

Repeating the text over and over to pad your chapters, is bad form for an author.

I know it is difficult to translate your story to English, and I have no issue with the grammar or spelling, because I enjoy the story so much.

I started this book yesterday, and can't stop reading!

Finally going on the hunt for himself instead of having the shadow do all the work.

This is hacking at it's finest! Finding shortcuts in the system to get what you want.

His shadow has mad heart! Once he's able to summon it in the open, it might be stronger than him.

I am truly enjoying this story! I understand that you want to get feedback, but some of the "authors notes," are a bit long, and take up areas that I feel, could be better used for the story.