The author literally described and repeated the same scenerio 5 different times in not so different 5 different ways… this book has a good storyline but needs a serious edit.
Decades of silence and numbness seemed to unravel in the face of this near lifeless body.
LGBT+ · Ellie_Ethereal
Omg… how many times are their hair, eyes & aura going to be described??? We got a pretty good grasp of that early, early on in the book.
As Xu Feng sat mostly admiring Xuan Yang's scholarly aura, he couldn't help but marvel at the man's appearance. Xuan Yang had a certain air of refinement about him, with his sleek, black hair neatly tied back and his dark eyes scanning the pages of the book in front of him.
LGBT+ · Ellie_Ethereal
They are doing way too much. This is dumb👎
ch 593 Chapter 586 - He Fucked Up
LGBT+ · DrAxy66
Agreed…. This does not make sense!
"I'll do whatever it takes to be with you."
LGBT+ · RoseNesha
One of the BEST stories I’ve read since becoming BLNovel fan! Fantastic! No o guess I’l read your next novel!
ch 617 Final Final Chapter
LGBT+ · Andru_9788
I’m getting a little suspicious Kwang. He seems to know way too much about everyone 🤔🤫🫣
ch 135 He Is Not The Killer
LGBT+ · delanasiwarka
Han Han such a sly butth@@@ but u gotta luv him!😆
'Checkmate,' said Zi Han internally.
LGBT+ · Andru_9788
Why are the privelage chapters so expensive?
ch 110 Lie Busted?!
LGBT+ · delanasiwarka
I’m weak😂🤣😅
They soon realised that he had no recollection of who he was or where he was from but he absolutely remembered he had a wife. He didn't know who or where his wife was but he was adamant that he had a wife.
LGBT+ · Andru_9788
See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
ch 25 For Your Own Good
LGBT+ · delanasiwarka
Just tell him Yi Chen so u can ave your baby back!
ch 400 I apologize in advance
LGBT+ · Andru_9788
Look at this dude trying to be all romantic! Makes me feel super bad for riding steadfast on the Clyde & Rylie train.🥺
ch 438 Chapter 435 - For You :)
LGBT+ · DrAxy66
Just luv luv luv them!!! So I’m assuming, hoping, praying that the separation in the future is fake!!!🙏
ch 374 Angel Wings for an angelic fiance
LGBT+ · Andru_9788
See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
ch 372 Do you swear servitude to the Bloodgarde till death....,"
LGBT+ · Andru_9788
Dang! I feel like I’ in am in a r Kelly song! Everybody got full a@@ bodies in their closets!
ch 431 Chapter 428 - The Painter
LGBT+ · DrAxy66
Chen Chen letting Han Han know what he’s missing! ☺️🤣
ch 370 Second chances
LGBT+ · Andru_9788
This book has a great storyline and interesting characters. At first I wasnt’t for the trupple, but it grew on me. What hasn’t grown on me is the amount of wasted words the author utilizes in their efforts of creating visual descriptions of the scenery and characters. Literally, in most chapters, the 1st few pages are repetitive descriptions of the ‘lush estate’ or ‘beauty of the mls. If they have to provide a detailed reminder every chapter of the aesthetic prowess of the characters & backdrop, do it in 1-2 paragraphs per chapter rather than repeating yourself multiple times wasting multiple pages of each chapter. A proofreader is definitely needed.
The Ger's Contract Marriage [BL]
LGBT+ · Ellie_Ethereal