May i ask why you are using names feom harry potter?
ch 72 Until This Frail Body Of Mine Withers Away
Fantasy · Elyon
I love the story line but give me more detail!! Of everything !!❤️
ch 27 Chapter 27
Fantasy · JasmineJosef
See this! I just gifted the story: Sword
ch 25 Chapter 25
Fantasy · JasmineJosef
I agree once reading that part again
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Fantasy · JasmineJosef
With the added names from harry potter makes the stories seem less authentic To me.. Great story i love it But then the Names took away from it. As in the workd you crested with tgese characters was complicated snd deep abd amazing. then when the Names were added it kind if tajes you out of thAt world. mafe me Realize i was reading a FIction story instead if the mivue unfoldIng in my head....
ch 72 Until This Frail Body Of Mine Withers Away
You Will Call Me Sir
Fantasy · Elyon