Webnovel Author: jojojo66 - Fanfic Collection

mc can use yang yin chakra beofre he can graduate from academy.where is the training arc.as he didnt get any wish from god he is just normal people in naruto.so he at least should struggle doing things like that.and merging two chakra nature idnt that easy if that was easy orochimaru would have all the genkai by himself

The story is good so far.i want to see how you make hiro strongest.because with that cursed energy to control two elements, I dont see him suprassing Sakuna.

you don't describe the match. There is no suspense in the match. Characters are bland.Its seems like I am reading something written by A.I. And for the match description, try to read some football related novel.Learn how they describe it. And for a football novel it quite fast paced.

Well not gonna make any promises.But I have lots of idea about this fic.

uukanshu

signing at nue come something's like that

lol copy of a chinese novel u just changed the...........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

I want to see how you make Madara stronger than Gojo. infinity it self represent time and space.So with out plot armour u can't see any way to suppress gojo.