After reading the old and new versions you definitely are writing better. Hopefully the pacing isn't as rushed as the old one. Anyway, Looking forward how you handle the other chapters and new ones.
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After reading the old and new versions you definitely are writing better. Hopefully the pacing isn't as rushed as the old one. Anyway, Looking forward how you handle the other chapters and new ones.
Welcoming the Chaos
Fantasy · Nacho4U