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:D Aww, thank you. However, this one has been dropped. I have rewritten this with the title "The Hidden Secret of the Yakuza."

I think the writing improved as the chapters progressed, but I think the author could benefit from reading other books and becoming more familiar with the craft of writing. To really draw readers into the story, the author should focus on developing clear and detailed descriptions of characters, settings, and events. You have picked a strong storyline (murder & revenge) and if it's done well, it can be really interesting. I wish you the best of luck in polishing and shaping your story.

The world of this story is clearly a very magical and interesting one! I'm really curious to see how world-building develops as the story unfolds. The main character is still rather unknown, and deservedly so, as it has only been two chapters. I'm hoping he will have some exciting adventures and that his journey will be filled with magical surprises. It's fascinating to see how this world's many elements will affect and shape his journey. Good luck with your work, I will definitely follow it. <3

A proper review based on the first three chapters is early, so I might edit it later. Although it's difficult to say how well the world-building is done, there is at least some sort of magic, which is a plus for me. MC is still mystery, so hopefully his character development will be interesting. It's pretty easy to read the text. In my preference the synopsis is a bit too long and overly descriptive. Reading about plot twists is more interesting for me when I'm already invested in the characters. Good luck with your work.

First of all, I loved how the writing at some points felt like the MC was writing a letter to her friend or her personal diary. It really gave more depth and feeling to the story because it made the protagonist more relatable! By reading her thoughts, we got to know her better and understood her struggles more deeply. There is definitely an element of mystery going on and it keeps the reader engaged/interested in finding out what will happen next. The new world really seemed magical and fascinating from the first descriptions, so I look forward to seeing how far the world-building will go. You're doing a great job, keep it up!

Very well written and the text is easy to read! Constant updates are a huge plus as well! Such a nice story by a great author ʕ•́ᴥ•̀ʔっ ٩(˘◡˘)۶

Read everything in one sitting :D loved the characters, even the seme came a bit too harsh at the beginning. Would have loved to see more chapters of the pair <3

First of all, I am not a fan of omegaverse. I tend to skip stories in that genre, but this book's cover caught my interest and started to read without even reading the synopsis ;; And I got hooked! Such a beautifully written story with loveable characters, especially little Syri 🥺😭 will be probably the first omegaverse novel that I will finish. Keep up the great work with your writing! 👌🏼