Webnovel Author: KingHadesUltimate - Fanfic Collection

Losing a leg probably means more time to write.

I'm counting on you, dutch.

One more flaw, the weaposn that are dropped are TOO high level specially this early in the game. It should've had limitation, like "You can only equip this item after reaching level 50" and "You need to this minimum stat points to properly equip this item Strength: 75, Vitality ;50" it gives tension and importance to the stat points instead of being just there as a feature or design.

I'm an amature writer just like you and even made the same mistake as you but; Yes, slow down a bit. Take more time to flesh out the rules of your world, I also recommend drawwing a map (It doesn't need to be great) so you can better understand the locations. Like, if Blackwater is in the eastern continent, you may forget this detail a hundred chapters from now so its better to have a pre-drawn map.

Rupees are so invaluable that it might as well be replaced with dollars. Actually some countries already implemented this. The most recent one I can remember is SRI lanka. since their currency was devalued so much that their citizens and eventually the government began dealing in foreign currency. Such as the USD and the POUND STERLING.

My one complain about fatty is that he and his friendship with MC is too shallow. Life is more than just money. Maybe if he not only loaned money to MC but also let him lodge in his apartment. As he was livinga destructive live-style fatty tried to straighten him up and get him a job to eventually support himself. But through constant argument and bickering he finally put him on a trial by kicking him out. To make him realized that he's on his last threads and that he shouldn't keep smashing right through the same brick-wall despite knowing that it is destructive to those around him and those who care for him.