some_dude_1877

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some_dude_1877
some_dude_1877
3 years ago
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I'm such an idiot one of the Outer Deities is called Circle of Inevitably, which is likely the cause of the abnormalities.

His gaze quickly swept around and he noticed something familiar: black symbols resembling thorns that drilled out of the left chest of Padre Guillaume Bennet and circled behind him.

Lord of Mysteries 2: Circle of Inevitability

Lord of Mysteries 2: Circle of Inevitability

Fantasy · Cuttlefish That Loves Diving

some_dude_1877
some_dude_1877
3 years ago
Commented

Church of the God of combat? is this taking place in the past because I'm pretty sure the God of Combat was killed quite a while ago.

The Intis Republic lay on the Northern Continent, where the orthodox deities were the Eternal Blazing Sun and the God of Steam and Machinery. These two churches divided the faith of almost all the people, and they didn't allow the Church of Evernight Goddess, the Church of the Lord of Storms from the Loen Kingdom, the Church of Earth Mother from the Feynapotter Kingdom, the Church of the God of Knowledge and Wisdom from Lenburg, and the Church of the God of Combat from the Feysac Empire to come in and preach.

Lord of Mysteries 2: Circle of Inevitability

Lord of Mysteries 2: Circle of Inevitability

Fantasy · Cuttlefish That Loves Diving

some_dude_1877
some_dude_1877
4 years ago
Commented

this is suspiciously like the novel Blue Core

'An elf! This world has elves!! Wait, why am I thinking that?' The dungeon thought to himself before an overwhelming sense of possessiveness overcame him. 'I must have her!'

The Illicitous Dungeon

The Illicitous Dungeon

Fantasy · Wolfick

some_dude_1877
some_dude_1877
4 years ago
Commented

What about the animals?

"My liege, they did it to mate with the females didn't they?"

A Story of Evil

A Story of Evil

Fantasy · Campoccino

some_dude_1877
some_dude_1877
4 years ago
Commented

I always liked how much you can twist a word and still understand it

Ace stood rooted to the ground, stunned, feeling deceived. She shook her head. She did not mind, really. As a saintess, she had abundant in monies.

As A Cardinal, I Don't Do Overtime

As A Cardinal, I Don't Do Overtime

Fantasy · Southsky Star

some_dude_1877
some_dude_1877
4 years ago
Commented

the author is really pushing that the royal family is pathetic

The sudden situation made the Sixth Prince quiver, and he was so scared that he peed his pants. He did not care about the embarrassing incident. Knowing that he was out of the werewolf's control, he hurriedly rolled and crawled in the direction of Monn.

As A Cardinal, I Don't Do Overtime

As A Cardinal, I Don't Do Overtime

Fantasy · Southsky Star

some_dude_1877
some_dude_1877
4 years ago
Commented

maybe there are 'problems' that monsters have when born in a lower strata that the ones born higher up don't have

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Chrysalis

Chrysalis

Fantasy · RinoZ

some_dude_1877
some_dude_1877
5 years ago
Posted

the writing quality is great and the background is also good but the story progresses a bit too fast at the beginning and the main character's personality design is a bit bad it looks like your trying to add both an emotional character at the Grand Army chapters but also trying to make him cool and collected which just doesn't fit for me.