Webnovel Author: onewhodreams

This is a type of work that get trash as it progresses It was really awesome till first 150 chapters then got really boring till the point that i might have fallen a sleep

This Young Master is not Cannon Fodder

Eastern · KaiserBlak

onewhodreams

2yr

Replied to IChaosI

But whose eye was that

King of Gods

Eastern · Fast Food Restaurant

onewhodreams

2yr

Posted

Do all the authors nowadays think with their dick these dayss. .... Sigh. . *Exasperated* The story was awesome Just a simple version of warlock of the magus world but why the fuck is there an haremmm? ??, You wana popularize your work by adding boobs? ?And butts in play?

The Holy Chronicles of Baator

Anime & Comics · Trafford

onewhodreams

2yr

Commented

Sorry but Like always I'm commenting the faults once again Not pointing at this work but to all of the xuanhuan, xianxia or wixia Why do the mc have to be so high profile ,arrogant, the girls falling for him instantly /in a few daysormonths It's getting realllllly annoying and boring aswell

ch 37 Chapter 37

Soul Land 3: Legend of the Jade Emperor

Anime & Comics · IHaveNthToDo

onewhodreams

2yr

Commented

Wow What a cliche scene Just trust me😂😂 Deep sense of security Wow

ch 36 Chapter 36

Soul Land 3: Legend of the Jade Emperor

Anime & Comics · IHaveNthToDo

onewhodreams

2yr

Commented

Too cocky and arrogant for his own good Without plotarmour backing him up He'd die a million times over. He's not worthy to weild the power of jade emperor

ch 33 Chapter 33

Soul Land 3: Legend of the Jade Emperor

Anime & Comics · IHaveNthToDo

onewhodreams

2yr

Replied to UselessAcc

SORRY BUT Isn't it being cruel than prideful ?

[COMPLETED] TBATE | SHADOW MONARCH

Anime & Comics · UselessAcc

onewhodreams

2yr

Posted

Had a lot of potential and got me hooked up but i started to get dissatisfied with a lot of things Mc is a straight dumb guy his smaller spore evolution game had a lot of flaws first flaw _players were able to see him And they even tried to kill him numerous time _he's hypocritical _game has a lot of pointless freedom its fine if players could go to the bigger world but why the fucl was slime guy able to return to the real world it has made the novel lose its taste I should have been like once you go to the other world Once youcdie in that world you die for real you won't be able to return _mc is incompetent so my suggestion is beready to get disappointed and quit this work its

Nurturing Humanity

Urban · Three Hundred Pounds of Smile

onewhodreams

2yr

Posted

Well It is one of the most uniquely written novels i've read ,certainly this fiction has potential but updating stability is a serious problem.

I’m in Marvel, my wife is Godking Hela

Movies · linFan

onewhodreams

2yr

Commented

Seriously... Chicken nuggies or whatever needs to be removed

ch 16 Hole?

Rise Of The Worm Sovereign

Eastern · Grand_Void_Daoist

onewhodreams

2yr

Replied to LollipoPReapeR

Yeah I always inadvertently read that phase and after reading it i feel like i wated my time.

ch 14 Jump?

Rise Of The Worm Sovereign

Eastern · Grand_Void_Daoist

onewhodreams

2yr

Commented

That was hilarious 😂 The way he died was one of the legendary way to die comparable only to kazuma from konosuba

ch 0 1 Egg?

Rise Of The Worm Sovereign

Eastern · Grand_Void_Daoist

onewhodreams

2yr

Posted

Hey I've just finished reading first and second chapter and I didn't like how the MC was so obsessed about being with his little crush ,so i thought if the novel if all about him being strong to revive his little crush .I'd rather not read this work So i wanted to know if he gets over his crush So that i can continue reading.