This one
2) Start a new Translation - Genshin Impact~
I just wanted you to make a movie: You made a Honkai Star Rail movie
Video Games · LordIsland
Thank you very much.
next upload i only upload 1 chapter(2 chapter a day), why? because i paid it.
Honkai Impact 3rd, But I'm Ren Amamiya!
Video Games · R_Arven
There is too little chapter to judge. I need more. And I have to ask is this an original or a translation? If this is an original then the story is very interesting to me. If this is translation, can you give me the raw name.
A pretty cool story. Is this a translation? If so can anyone give me the raw name?
Rider kick!!!!!
Also, maybe hold off introducing new characters so frequently. As with the current cast, there are so many possible things to do. There's no need for more characters if you haven't reinforce the current characters relationship.
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Rising through the Omniverse as a Herrscher
Anime & Comics · Yuuki_Shirogane
I'm sorry if my comments are too harsh. But here is the summary of I want to say. Your story is good, albeit some decisions I don't agree with. But you keep putting too many ideas in your story to the point that it almost impossible to know if those idea have any relation to the story. I would suggest you add small omakes as your ideas that may or may not be canon like a nascent kaleidoscope.
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Rising through the Omniverse as a Herrscher
Anime & Comics · Yuuki_Shirogane
To be honest, she's more of herrscher of dominance because of her many side and manipulative she is.
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Rising through the Omniverse as a Herrscher
Anime & Comics · Yuuki_Shirogane
Hi
Game Developer : Starting with Fate series
Video Games · ScoldeyJod