Pricelesscolt

1yr

Posted

It is very good, But there are some grammar issues that are noticable when reading. Some scenes are also very repetitive in the way they are wrote. Otherwise it is so far a very fun and interesting read.

Kenki Tensei: Elf no Musume wa Sekai Saikyou no Kenshi wo Mezasu

Anime & Comics · Paichun

Pricelesscolt

1yr

Posted

I've read a lot of Fire emblem awakening fanfiction, that contains an Self insert type character. Many times I have seen the same character end up with Robin. This story however feels like a breath of fresh air for Robin romance. I give this the highest praise I can give.

Hero of the Emblem

Video Games · redmoon85

Pricelesscolt

1yr

Commented

1

ch 0 8 Fight vs Tatyana and meeting... apes?

Phoenix In DXD

Anime & Comics · Chaotic_Phoenix

Pricelesscolt

1yr

Commented

Pyrrha:Tax evasion is a crime Neo Neo: it's an obligation

ch 37 ..Storm that is approaching?

RWBY Omniversal Chatroom System

Anime & Comics · Saeko_Kaburagi

Pricelesscolt

1yr

Commented

Soul eater hundred percent

ch 10 Team JNPR

RWBY Omniversal Chatroom System

Anime & Comics · Saeko_Kaburagi

Pricelesscolt

2yr

Commented

Are you going to change the part in chapter 6, where Renesmee calls Edward "Daddy" and he has the nearly same reaction as he does in this chapter?

ch 0 4 She is my mother (Revision)

The Second Life of Graciela Vera Hale

Book&Literature · PettyPrincess66

Pricelesscolt

2yr

Commented

Ninth time re reading, let's go

ch 11 NOT A CHAPTER - UPDATE.

The Second Life of Graciela Vera Hale

Book&Literature · PettyPrincess66

Pricelesscolt

2yr

Commented

I like the idea of having it in multiple chapters more, but that can lead to a feeling of interruption with the new chapter and the votes and comments so I'll say 1

ch 0 3 ONE MORE VOTE