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Well its look like this is another one that will never continue, ibwonder how this site and fanfiction is still going on , i wish there is a ia that can write something cause chat gpt is not good for that.

Hello my friend about the re write of the first book I guess it's not necessary I guess the only that this need is For harry or hadrian the knowledge about marvel and dc and have some relation with thor an Loki like his son I remember that is a daughter of loki with her name was black so you can use hadrian to be a asgardian son of loki.

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My opinim looks good I love the sentry and his design if you want to keep up use the sentry of dark avengers with gobles and rings in his arms so Keep going the plot looks interesting and I want some more so you can doit make your dreams come true dont get down an dont worry be happy.

Its a good one kep it up, I Like How this is not a bizarre harem fanfic and the protagonist is cool bit of I I'm honest you should use the ultimate forms or try to make it real with grey matter.

You can do it don't get down. I hope you can have inspiration to continued so good luck maybe see you later in this story or in another one.

muy bueno pero deberías de hacerlos un poco más largos por ejemplo lo de este capítulo cabía en el pasado. pero en si se está llevando la historia bien sigue así.

It is good but you can give the MC more development interactivity with other heroes and young heroes and sidekicks to make it more interesting.

good story i want to see more about it and I hope you still continue and thank you to publicated it you can doit and congratulation and blessing for the future