Webnovel Author: Valman - Novel Collection

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You probably like it because it mixes several genres and it shows some hard truth

Thank you very much for giving me your opinion and yes I make a lot of mistakes

Valarie is a good book but the magic is not very present for the moment nor the lover I still give it a good mark because it improved in the more distant chapters

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Will have to already talk about the type of magic you want in your book because I can give you tons of it but if it's a destructive thing and you do a good thing ... it does not work even with the most great goodness of the world

It's a very good story, the only flaw I find in it is its slowness and its magic that I have the impression that we show in a hurry after it's my opinion, maybe you find yourself that it's too magical but I find that it's not magical enough and that it should go deeper into it

As usual I have to look for flaws in the books and this flaw is the very long prologue but after that you get very attached to the characters and the world around them so here is what I think, superb book to read afterwards a hard day or after a boring day

thank you very much for all your compliments

Well, already the book is great I only criticize it because I am a writer who likes to find some small flaw, I find the book a little slow but you get attached to the characters quickly so it's not a flaw, relationships and behaviors are well managed .... but after seeing that I go from an investigative book to a quiet book knows its cheek

So what I have to say, the writer asked me to read his book, I find the writing and the story special but unfortunately I do not put all the points because the beginning and long !!! The beginning is so long that you don't even want to read the rest yet the rest is better than the beginning! Otherwise read this book if you have the time

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