I didn't even notice that mistake .thank you I appreciate it
The shadow wasn't looking animal nor beast, it was constantly changing its shape. Hordward run to reach vardus and Ingus to protect them.
Fantasy · Mike_Makake
i see. the main reason I chose to write the way I did, was to be unique. though the way you used for your explanation was good and I thought about it, I realized they were many stories written that way, so as the tricky guy I am, I invented my own style. but i guess i can try your way in another style 🧐maybe I can come up with something more fitting both to the style you showed and mine. thanks a lot, I appreciate your help
When I woke up, I noticed that I've been healed, ("for how long was I asleep?") I didn't know.
Fantasy · Mike_Makake
that too I tried improving it within further chapters. as for the grammar, I know I lack some skills but I will do my best to be more impactful.
ch 0 2 Awakening
Fantasy · Mike_Makake
I see, I tried improving those features as chapters gone by. you will realize it. thanks for your help.
ch 0 1 A fortunate help?
Fantasy · Mike_Makake
okay, thanks a lot. though I had a question. well what you do say is correct but what I meant by putting those quotes to inner thoughts within a POV, was to make people understand that the POV I wrote was meant to emphasize the characters behaviors towards the world and the quotes to what he was thinking at some moments of his actions. but I do get what you said. thanks again for your comment.
When I woke up, I noticed that I've been healed, ("for how long was I asleep?") I didn't know.
Fantasy · Mike_Makake
hi, thanks for your support
ch 27 Origins II : The birth of Evil
Fantasy · Mike_Makake
Hello everyone, it's been a while. i hope you enjoy the story so long so far and i want to thank you again for your support. check out my other book "Heart strings : Paths of destiny" here on webnovel, it's a horror themed book
Demons of the fog
Fantasy · Mike_Makake