Alright. So far so good... or not.
ch 0 2 Chapter 1: The Man Within the Dream
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I just finished reviewing the thing and... gods, the typos.
ch 0 1 Prologue
Fantasy 路 Animauthor
There are too many 'howevers' 馃槀 11, I think?
ch 0 1 Prologue
Fantasy 路 Lievel_Veltrandt
His face paled, as he turned to his boss again. And as he did, his eyes suddenly widened from sudden pain, that was coming from his abdomen. His entire body then went cold, and he fell to the ground.
Fantasy 路 Lievel_Veltrandt
I feel you..
In which he really did though. Quite spectacularly at that.
Fantasy 路 Lievel_Veltrandt
Ohhhh!!! And we're back!!!
ch 32 Record #31: A Lull Before the Storm
Fantasy 路 Lievel_Veltrandt
Uhh... Ahem... MOOOOAAAAARRR!!!! Is that enough?
ch 71 Seeking Answers (5)
Eastern 路 Lievel_Veltrandt
ch 68 Seeking Answers (2)
Eastern 路 Lievel_Veltrandt
Nice one[img=recommend]
ch 0 2 Record #1: From a Prisoner...
Fantasy 路 Lievel_Veltrandt
Then why the hell would he introduce himself as astra? An IGN?
And so, this was how my legend began. (PS. My real name is Mike.)
Fantasy 路 Lievel_Veltrandt
Ahahahaha! this is damn hilarious!
Managed to hold it back in time, but the wet stain is glaring back at me. Goodbye, dignity...
Fantasy 路 Lievel_Veltrandt
An interesting prologue. But the harem tag intrigues me. hehe
ch 0 1 Prologue
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Wow...
The Author's POV
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