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After looking through it, I found this is the same work, with a different title. Are you the original author or not? If not, did you get his permission to post it here?

A novel with an interesting concept, it's just that the character development is too slow, as if you were defusing a 'bomb' that was confirmed to explode, which would make readers judge this novel badly, Beta Mc, etc. Even though Mc (the stupid one) isn't actually a beta, he's just trying to maintain a rational attitude from where he came from. Despite what he's been through, nothing rational, like I said before, he's just stupid, not a beta. I'll just put off reading it again, because it's too boring, if 'bomb defusing' drags on.

Next Generation Harlem King!!!! Hahahaha.

I know, Yuuto, he is the reincarnation of the Harlem King!!! Ha ha.

A little curious, I saw 'Note, Profane Prince' in the synopsis, and from Xinzi's conversation about Celestials, it reminded me of the story of Profane Prince of Domination. The question is, is this world based on Profane's novel?

I don't think there's anything wrong with being different, in fact in my view it's good. If it's just following 'standardization', how can it be called 'Fanfic?

This is the one I don't understand the 'purpose' of your two novels I read!? Why ignore your sister? Note: this is not a question, just an unsolved mystery! I hope it will be answered in the future.

'Nobody likes being cheated on.' It was human nature, but they would do so if the opportunity arose. After all, what Amelia did was not included in the 'Netorare' category, it was more inclined to 'Netorase'(Polyamorous). And in addition to the background of the world it is not a big problem (in my opinion), and instead adds a new flavor to the ero-novel concept (which mostly just takes fmc here and there). So in conclusion, I really love this novel. Ha ha ha.....

His name shouldn't be 'King' but 'Foothold'. LoL

ahahahaha... I actually laughed out loud reading this!! It feels so fresh, how Ryu 'polluted' his teacher with beautiful ideas and 'art'!! Lol.

Oh, I see. I wish you all the best from your other amazing work!

Thanks for the great chapter! Hmmm, I wanted to ask, are you going to continue your other work on AO3? Or, it becomes an exclusive story?

I wonder, will there ever be a time when Riel will show his true nature to his family? Like, when he killed the slave dealers without batting an eye? I know this won't be answered, but it still makes me curious.

I want an answer! Are you 'Tento'?

The perspective is not balanced, sometimes changing from first person to third person perspective. I don't know why the readers haven't told you. even though it will make the author grow if corrected.

you must add the tags Drama, hurt comfort, romance, and anxiety disorder. I know, you don't like some readers on webnovel (because in webnovel most of them are beta readers). But I think there is a bit of fault with you too, you wrote about someone suffering from Anxiety Syndrome and coitophobia, in the first person perspective, I would suggest writing in the third person perspective. The reason is, not many people enjoy reading Mc's inner thoughts. I suggest you read some on AO3 (if you haven't already). There, many professional writers will motivate you. Also, put your work there, I'm sure your writing will thrive! The readers there are amazing!!

well, that's fine. Thank you for clearing up my misunderstanding.

You know, possessiveness is fine. As long as you understand the limits. Example: you may limit the lives of your girls, as long as it's for the convenience of both of you. If it's just for your own convenience, they are nothing more than slaves/robots. And, I didn't see the Romance tag, but I was expecting a relationship development, not PokeWoman.