just to suffer...
'Why am I here…'
Anime & Comics · The_POZ
ayo
(You abandoned soul come and be my servant. I'm giving you the chance to see a completely different world. Come and serve me, Esdeath)
Anime & Comics · DEADLYSHADOW
I like your writing... but i will never feel satisfied about the outcome when there are so many ways for the MC to get stronger. all I got to say is that 'for someone who's terrified of dying he sure like to limit his options' that's why reading this feels so forced. and the worse thing is that issei felt stronger than this while having less time than than this MC.
This book has been deleted.
why is no one talking about low level? this why I hate time skips.. MC level up 25 levels in few days. time skip 6 months gains only 25 more. bro if he only get "1" level a day he would be almost 200.. and don't tell me that it becomes harder to level.. yes the exp per level increase, but so does the exp per NPC kill too!
ch 0 5 Plot Is About to Begin, First (R-18)
Anime & Comics · FaNFiC_Writer_2000
Huh! Shadow monarch working with the church? The fuck??
... you basically made him very weak to mental attack is draig is able to look at his memories. at least make him able to do the same, this make him look so weak to someone h who has those resistances...
Of course, meanwhile, Ddraig was looking at my memories, and of course I was aware of that, but I didn't care.
Anime & Comics · DEADLYSHADOW
Sorry but I cringed so much... First, you said he got all of aizen power and experience and somehow he still act like a virgin around women. And then he goes traveling and somehow end up in "clearly" akeno house, yea right... I swear to god if you make him indebted to them so you can have an excuse to help Rias, I'm going to be so disappointed.
ch 11 chapter 10 journey to the west
Others · susuke_uchiwa
So you went with one of the worst cliché ...hiding MC's power. That was cringey...
ch 19 Combat Class - end(Short chap)
Anime & Comics · Xeno_Xcalius
Doesn't he need to cure his curse?? Then any world that can cure that should be his priority if we think from the MC point of view... Start with start with cultivation (guaranteed that it will remove it because cultivation remove anything negative from the body.l, qi is vastly overpowered then demon slayers powers) or some world that has an easy to get immortality( there are lot) He can cure it easily this way or with his current plan without unnecessary cringey drama. Something you never do in any 'action' story is nerfing the MC.
ch 0 8 Power Scaling
Anime & Comics · milfloverzz
Luffy claps
" Hey Uta, let's make a pinky promise. When we're out there making our dreams come true, let's meet up and reunite. You alright with that? " Luffy asked. Uta looked at him and nodded determinedly.
One Piece: I Will Become The Pirate King!!
Anime & Comics · some_writer