Badges 8
Moments 6
I like the previous chapters. skipping certain things may be better but its also nice to see these little extra scenes
Note: Adjusted my writing style and pacing by more scene jumps after a review of needing to stop 'telling' and focus on 'showing'. Trying to be more concise. This is better?
My CEO Harem Cultivation System
Urban 路 RachelRuth
Well in my opinion its not as great as long range attacks but then again All weapons have their pros and cons
Author Note: Head pats are great, you know? :D Truth be told, I don't know a lot about cultivation and might conjure some stuff on my own. What's your take on sword qi and sword techniques?
My CEO Harem Cultivation System
Urban 路 RachelRuth
Once again you are amazing at this dude
Author Note: Dude, it took me hours to write this haha, I have no idea if it's good. Praise me please. Inspired by 'It's a Dangerous Game" a duet song from the gothic musical Jekyll & Hyde.
My CEO Harem Cultivation System
Urban 路 RachelRuth
Whats your price
Both institutions were located in the common area and are quite close to one another, hence Sato and Hayami often walk together to school since the distance is about a 15 minutes walk from home. Sometimes doing their journey, people mistake them for a couple fit for one another due to their good looks.(AN : Nope, I'm not hinting to any incest ideas..)
Infinite Realm
Games 路 Tengu_of_Old
Maybe we can have a number 馃檹
Both institutions were located in the common area and are quite close to one another, hence Sato and Hayami often walk together to school since the distance is about a 15 minutes walk from home. Sometimes doing their journey, people mistake them for a couple fit for one another due to their good looks.(AN : Nope, I'm not hinting to any incest ideas..)
Infinite Realm
Games 路 Tengu_of_Old
I can already imagine them fighting over who has more kids with him馃槀
William grinned as he carried his cousin back inside the house. Est, Ashe, Wendy, and Isaac followed behind him. The four girls already knew how much William cared for his family members. Seeing William spoiling Eve made them think that the Half-Elf would definitely dote on his own children when they were born.
Reincarnated With The Strongest System
Fantasy 路 Elyon