GodofKiyotaka - Profile

Here's my review based on my opinion. At the start of the story , it's pretty okay..but the character development seems lacking as the chapters go by. I don't know what to say because English is not my main forte.  The protagonist in this story is like any other cultivation novel, not like something "transmigrated person" that we can relate to. I mean his personality was like in Xianxia novels that doesn't have common sense of people in modern. Yes he has the knowledge of the modern world but lacks common norms. I'm saying in my OPINION that the novel downfall started in the tournament. I'm not criticizing the romance, but the MC is pretty biased and always looking for flaws in beautiful girls. like he is kinda gentleman but at the same time it kinda annoys me.  Thanks for writing, I appreciate your hard work I just want to share my very honest opinion.

Sorry but I think my grammar really sucks