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Replied to Zan_Crass I actually haven't thought about that. More importantly, thank you for telling me that. This fanfiction is an older one of mine and I'm still going through the kinks. My reasoning behind Asteria being stunned by the trio is because she overexerted herself and didn't have much time to react. I know I should have explained that more in the chapter, which I'm planning to do later on, but I have been very busy with school and work that I tend to forget to put more details in the chapter. Thank you again for your thoughts. I will be fixing that when I finish the first part of the story that I have planned. That way it makes more sense to the readers.
ch 18 They Know
Demigods Quest to Hogwarts
Book&Literature · Cookie_ftfan
Thank you for the review, I will take into consideration what you said about Annabeth and Leo. My plan was to have them come in later on in the story but with the stress of school and other things I have been unable to write chapter 30 the way I want. I will try to make the next chapter come out sooner.
Demigods Quest to Hogwarts
Book&Literature · Cookie_ftfan