Webnovel Author: HaughtyYoungMaster - Fanfic&Novel Collection

Honestly, I had intended to read this again since the last time I did was around January 2021, and I had stopped reading it for a little while on translatinotaku; I had paused at the point when they gave him the moniker "Konoha's Asura". So I was browsing on Webnovel when I came across this Fanfiction; luckily for me, it was the same Fanfiction that I had read 10 months prior. So, after reading over the description, I discover that the Author is really attempting to 'improve' the syntax of this Godly Fiction. What should I do? I double-check everything! Confident in the fact that this is far more readable than the previous time I read it. HAHA! I'm sorry for making such a rash choice, but after a few chapters, I've come to the conclusion that here is where I'm going to draw the line and call it quits. For this, I would use the phrase "swapping out" rather than "improving." So there you have it, your 'better' misconception as to what has been improved and what has not been improved. I'm not going to give you a low grade since this is not your work and is just a "improved" version. Using The God of Soul System and Hokage: Ryo Path, I attempted to replicate what you have done, my fellow Author; but, I was unable. Believe me when I say that it is far more difficult than it seems and sounds. I'll end by wishing you the best of luck in your writing endeavours and a long and prosperous career in the Department.

After suffering through the bad grammar and understanding, I have decided to abandon this fic at chapter 83. The amount of information placed into this fic is inconsistent and it lacks a concept, therefore I have decided to abandon it. However, this tale has an incredible opening, as well as a world-building that's also imaginative, powerful, and passionate. One of the finest I've ever read. In my experience, if your character is significant enough to have a name, they are also significant enough to have a purpose. As far as I can tell from what I've read so far, Akashi's character development is purely for narrative purposes; Akashi has a basic goal, which is to live an easy and pleasant existence. The way you conclude your tale will be remembered by readers for the longest time. I have a lot of thoughts, but for the time being, this is all I have to conclude.

There is just one love match, which I will not reveal until later, but if you truly want to know, simply ask. She appears at a later point in the plot

Translator? Author? Not at all, I'm just trying to make the translated version better by adding better grammar, sentence structure, and other improvements. Again, I'm just doing this for fun, and if the original author and translator would want me to remove it, I'll happily delete it.

No, this isn't a fanfic; I'm simply rewriting it to improve the syntax, punctuation, synonyms, and so on. So if you've read the story previously and want to read it again with way better quality, I'm not actually serious about this! Then stay a while.