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I love how the story is so intense and full of action! I think the main thing that could be improved is the punctuation, as well as maybe making it clear whether Ken’s thinking to himself or speaking out loud, or what tone of voice someone’s using. I’m excited to see what Ken does next!
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I love how the story is so intense and full of action! I think the main thing that could be improved is the punctuation, as well as maybe making it clear whether Ken’s thinking to himself or speaking out loud, or what tone of voice someone’s using. I’m excited to see what Ken does next!
Kenzai
Fantasy · SquidwardTentacles