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So the maids were just chilling? Why aren't the cops called yet!!?
"Cops. Definitely cops."
Urban · Anri
I think he's that way because he doesn't want what happened to his wife to happen to his daughters . It was mentioned that the mom was a swords woman, so he might think his daughters are safer inside the home, taking care of the house and children
ch 15 Ch. 15 I’ll Protect My Family (2)
History · InTheKnow92
Is the story going to progress so slow ?Because I feel it has a nice plot, but it needs to be balanced with action rather than repeating her thoughts and feelings over and over again but using different words. Sorry for the harsh criticism. I like this story, truly I do! I only think it has space for more improvements.
ch 0 2 Temporary
Fantasy · Da_Rose
No right, no wrong , no rules for meee🎶 I'm freeeeeee! 🎵
A cold breeze danced around him but the cold never bothered him. He thought hard, not taking a step out of the ice cave. The original owner was pitiful and touched somewhere deep inside Moulin. He closes his eyes and said a little prayer for him to the heavens.
Fantasy · Heather_ANARE
That's my theory
He's not teasing me, nor threatening. His expression is so gentle that, for a moment, I believe we've known each other way longer than the few days that can be summed up considering the last two years.
History · xiaohai_23
I guess we now know where she gets her selfishness from. Seriously, no matter how selfish the antagonists in this story, they are no where near this mother-daughter dou! They are in a whole new level!
"I won't be here. You know how I caught a chance, and I can't die like this. So why don't we leave together for a while? Huh? If things don't work out, I'm willing to divorce."
Fantasy · SanSobee
It's not like aria has any merciful end planned for Mielle
Since he had somewhat confided in himself, she had a guilty conscience about using him to hide her identity, but this was not the time to think of, because Mielle's end was drawing near. She put the salad in her mouth, wondering how she could drop Mielle into hell.
Fantasy · SanSobee
Umm...both 'sisters' are horrible, except Aria is the protagonist with a miserable past and Mielle is a spoiled child without a mother, showcased as an evil villian. I kind of side with mielle, because in my point of view, if a father married a prostitute with a daughter of unknown origin, I would hate them, too. Not to the point of murdering them, but I wouldn't feel uncomfortable around them or the father. Don't forget they live in a time where power, status and reputation are important. So, imagine entering society with someone worse than a commoner as your 'mother' and 'sister'.
Since he had somewhat confided in himself, she had a guilty conscience about using him to hide her identity, but this was not the time to think of, because Mielle's end was drawing near. She put the salad in her mouth, wondering how she could drop Mielle into hell.
Fantasy · SanSobee
She's becoming more evil, using people like chess pieces, yet she doesn't see herself in the wrong. Still, she blames others when they try to use her
ch 42 Chapter 42. The Secret Of The Hourglass, Part III
Fantasy · SanSobee
I'm not sure I like this fl, I mean the people surrounding mielle aren't to be blamed. She's blinded by her hatred and still blames it all on mielle
'Even if it takes half of my life, I can't afford to miss this opportunity. I will use the hourglass over and over to destroy Mielle thoroughly. If you are insulted daily, you will not be able to live in your right mind. And taking away your precious things would be very easy. I will turn the hourglass over, and take away your father, your loved one, and those who follow you. In the end, as you made me poison your tea in the past, I will make you do it yourself, and then, it'll be off with your head.'
Fantasy · SanSobee
Is it just me or does the high priest seem a little shady? I think he fell for her. Allandis, Carsien, Seymour, the crown prince, and now him?
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Not long ago, the master had suddenly stopped breathing. Zhao Qian hastened to obey Second Miss Lu and laid the master flat on the floor. However, he had no idea that Second Miss Lu would suddenly strike the master hard in the chest and even lock lips with him after that…
History · Chu Yue
Hello I read your comments on other people's stories ,and found that you are a great critique (is that what it's called?) Anyway, I would like to ask you maybe you could evaluate my work? But I didn't know how to contact you. If you agree to my request, can you please let me know? Thank you!
ch 0 4 Scéario 1: Médiéval Fantaisie
Fantasy · MsGaya
Seriously ?! No one else finds it I don't know, Freaky!? Strange? Unbelievably bone-chilling? No? Just me? OK. Good story BTW . Interesting...?
ch 0 3 Chapter 3
Rising Phoenix
History · World Convergence