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It’s normal, we evolve and writing isn’t easy. I do like your plot, and I’ll admit that it was maybe too soon to criticize anything (since I just read a few chapters), so please don’t take my words too seriously!

This book is actually really good, and do believe me when I say that I’m really picky about what I read. Overall, I gotta admit that it’s cliché, but the kind that I like (revenge, a devoted hubby, a strong FL, etc, you know what I mean). It also has plot twists and an interesting development that will get you hooked to the story and their characters. Author, tho there are some small grammatical mistakes (we all have), you truly did a good job 💕

I started reading this because the reviews said that this story was awesome, but as I started to read it was rather a bit disappointing. I believe that this story is not actually that bad, referring to plot-wise it’s interesting and quite new, but the pace felt off, it was too fast for me, rushed. The writing felt off sometimes, and a bit too much (like for example in the first chapter when the FL said something about her ocean eyes or something like that). I want to clarify that I’m not trying to hate on you (author), I felt that this story is good (since even if I felt a bit uncomfortable with the story, the plot was interesting enough as to making me read through), so I wanted to point out some things that may help you improve. And I‘m sorry if I came off as rude, if you felt offended do tell me!

So far I am loving this book, it’s refreshing and different and the story is interesting, there’s a lot of secrets to unveil! Neoma is really funny lol

I love it so far! I love the FL, she’s a mood🥰 and also loving the shameless ML, that couple are really suited to each other. The writing is really good, and so are the characters, the story so far is really good, tho I can’t wait to see our gurl to get her revenge!!❤️